Stay - A Scene
57The two characters in this dialogue are JARED and STELLA, both living in Los Angeles. JARED is a defense lawyer, and recently won a case defending a pimp, something for which he feels extremely guilty. He often sees hookers hanging around his practice, and picks up STELLA because her eyes are the loneliest he has seen. He feels that he will somehow redeem himself for setting a pimp free if he can talk to STELLA and try to make her not lonely, but he finds that he cannot control his anger at her reasons to put herself through prostitution. STELLA is a hooker who started when she was 19 because she needed money for drugs, specifically heroin. STELLA is trying get out of her drug addiction, but she has recently fallen back into it. In this scene, JARED has picked up STELLA and they have just finished sleeping together. JARED fell asleep immediately after they finished, and STELLA has waited around to be paid, and all the while she has been thinking about her addiction and why she continues to do this to herself.
-----
The scene starts in a motel room. The camera moves from the bed, where a man lays, disheveled within the sheets, to the bathroom, where a woman, STELLA, is putting on her makeup. She has heavy eyeliner and is currently removing some of which that has run down her cheeks from crying. She stares into the mirror at herself then moves to the main room of the motel.
The man in the bed, JARED, stirs as she begins to gather her things. The camera has a wide shot with the bed in the middle of the frame for most of the scene.
JARED
Mmmh--Oh, you're awake.
STELLA
Have been for a while.
JARED
Oh...Sorry. I didn't mean to make you wait.
STELLA
No need to apologize. You were asleep. People need their sleep.
JARED
You're a person.
STELLA
Am I really? That's a first.
JARED
Well, I meant that...don't you need your sleep?
STELLA
What leads you to believe that I don't get my sleep?
JARED
You were very tired last night.
STELLA
Was I?
JARED
You kept yawning.
STELLA
Ha--well maybe that was just you.
JARED
What?
STELLA
Nothing, nothing.
There is silence for a few seconds while STELLA continues to put together her things and JARED begins to get out of the bed.
JARED
How much is it that I owe you?
STELLA
Don't worry about it.
JARED
What?
STELLA
Don't worry about it.
JARED
I heard what you said.
STELLA
Then why did you say "what?"?
JARED
I've never heard of a...I've never been told not to worry about it...
STELLA
Well there's a first time for everything.
JARED
What was yours like?
STELLA
Excuse me?
JARED
I'm curious, if you don't mind...what was it like? Your first time doing…this. I probably wouldn't be able to relate much...but--
STELLA
Exactly. You can't relate. So there's no point in telling you anything.
JARED
Sorry, just...I didn't mean any disrespect.
There is an awkward silence while STELLA feels bad for her lash out at JARED. She sits down on the bed with her back to JARED.
STELLA
I was nineteen.
JARED
What?
STELLA
My first time...with this...I was nineteen.
JARED
Oh. That's young.
STELLA
Not as young as some of the others.
JARED
I'm sorry.
STELLA
It doesn't matter. Do you still want to hear the story?
JARED
Sure.
STELLA
I was nineteen. I just got out of high school and I was trying to get a job.
JARED
For what?
STELLA
What?
JARED
Most people have a reason for getting a job.
STELLA
I needed money.
JARED
Everyone needs money. What did you need it for?
STELLA
Buying things.
JARED
Like..?
STELLA
Like food. Or clothes.
JARED
Or?
STELLA
Or what? What are you trying to say?
JARED
I saw your arm. Don't try to play it off like you're some innocent little girl. You're just a druggie.
STELLA
Fuck you.
JARED
You already did.
STELLA stands and turns towards JARED.
STELLA
What the hell is your problem? First you start out all nice, asking me about my first time with shit guys like you, and now you're all yelling at me for doing drugs?
JARED
I don't like people who try to hide their past.
STELLA
I don't like people who nose into other people's business.
JARED
Well then.
STELLA
Well.
STELLA sits back down angrily, and starts scratching her arm.
JARED
How much do I owe you?
STELLA
Whatever, just, nevermind.
JARED
Okay, look, I'm sorry I said you're a pathetic druggie...Can I please just pay you?
STELLA
You didn't say I was pathetic.
JARED
Well there you go, I'm not all bad.
STELLA
You're such an asshole.
JARED
As if I didn't know.
STELLA
Why did you take me here?
JARED
Because it's the closest hotel to my work.
STELLA
No...why did you even pick me up? You seem like the guy who doesn't need a girl like me to be satisfied.
JARED
Your eyes.
STELLA
My eyes?
JARED
They were so...sad and lonely. Not to be too sappy, but I thought you might want someone to be with tonight. Even if it's an asshole.
Both breathe in a deep sigh and move their hands further back to lean back. Their hands touch just barely. As each speaks, they turn their heads to address each other without a full turn around.
STELLA
Thanks.
JARED
No problem.
Camera slowly zooms out. Fade to black.
vote upvote downshareprintflag
- Useful
- Funny
- Awesome (1)
- Beautiful (1)
- Interesting (1)







NatalieSack Level 2 Commenter 5 months ago
I don't know anything about screenwriting, so I don't know how valid my commentary is, but this is developing both a nice tension and a relationship between characters. There's a sort of push-pull dynamic going on. I have to say though that I believe Stella should demonstrate a little more self-preservation instinct. How many prostitutes would wait to be paid? It's my understanding they get paid up front. She should at least wrestle with the idea of stealing his wallet while he sleeps. Maybe she even takes it out, then sees pictures of his family, or some other item that makes her feel connected to him.